Friday, 16 October 2020

Beach Day Collage

 Hello everyone!!! Term 3 holidays is finally over and we are back at school for the last term of the holidays! Over the holidays my family went to the beach in Gisborne, it was just my family (Mum, Dad, my brother and I) we also decided to take the (what Dad calls the 'Mutt racer') aka the dog! :D Anyways, at the beach we built things in the sand, went swimming, played in with the dog and played cricket. We added a little twist to the cricket and we played it facing the water, so that the fielder had to go and fetch the ball in the water. Anyways, we had a really fun day and I might even do a blog about my holiday writing. Mrs Bennett let us make a collage to go with our writing so here is mine!  

Hope you enjoyed, see you next week with "Handy Hints with Hayley!'
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12 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 October 2020 at 14:20

    Hi, It's Troy from Ahipara school. That sounds like a cool holiday. Maybe next time you could put a bit more detail into your collage.

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    1. Anonymous20 October 2020 at 14:08

      Hello Troy!!
      Thanks for the feedback! Yes, maybe I could add a little bit more detail, what things do you think you would like to see more of? Thanks again!
      Ma Te Wa
      Hayley :D

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  2. Anonymous19 October 2020 at 14:21

    Hi Hayley it sounds like you had a great holiday I like your collage, keep up the great work! :D
    -Lola

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    1. Anonymous20 October 2020 at 14:09

      Hi Lola!!!
      Thanks for the feedback!
      Hayley! :D

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  3. Anonymous19 October 2020 at 14:26

    Hi Hayley your holiday sounded like fun and your collage is neat too.
    Maybe next time just add more detail. Capri

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    1. Anonymous20 October 2020 at 14:12

      Hello Capri!
      Thanks for the feedback!
      What kind of detail should I add?
      Thanks
      Hayley!

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  4. Anonymous19 October 2020 at 14:29

    Hi my name is Tamzyn I love your collage, Haylee maybe add more writing to it but other than that it is great.

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    1. Anonymous20 October 2020 at 14:13

      Hi Tamzyn!
      Thanks for the feedback!
      I will think about adding more writitng!
      Thanks!

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  5. Anonymous19 October 2020 at 14:30

    Hi it's Vinnie here from Ahipara. I like your collage of the beach. Why isn't someone bowling the ball to the boy?

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    1. Anonymous20 October 2020 at 14:14

      Hello Vinnie!
      Thanks for your feedback!
      Nobody is bowling the ball because I tried to add someone but it was quite hard, I will keep trying and maybe do a repost though!
      Thanks

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  6. Anonymous19 October 2020 at 14:31

    Hi, it's Jesse from Ahipara school here. I like your beach collage, I thought it was cool how you made a cricket bat and ball by the person so it looked like he was playing cricket. What programme did you use to create this?

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    1. Anonymous20 October 2020 at 14:16

      Hello Jesse!
      Thanks for your feedback!
      The programme I used was just Google Drawings. Maybe if you want I could to a video showing how to do it!
      Thanks

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