This term we are focusing on studying 'Fungi, Yeast and Mould'. We recently went on a fungi hunt around our school, to see how many species we can find. Back in class we did some slow writing (slow writing is a type of writing) Here is my writing...
HI Hayley I'm Troy from Ahipara school. I really like your descriptive writing. IT is very interesting. I have seen one of those before. Keep up the good work!
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
HI Hayley I'm Troy from Ahipara school. I really like your descriptive writing. IT is very interesting. I have seen one of those before.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
Hi Troy,
DeleteThanks for the feedback! Where have you seen the fungi, at your school, in your backyard????? Thanks once again!
Hayley :D