Kia ora Hayley, did you walk through the tunnel? I didn't know that trains went up that far. I have been in a tunnel by Otoko so I knew that the railway went out there. Has this poem got a special name for its type? The way you arranged the words is very effective. I especially liked "leaking, dripping, crying" It gave a sense of loneliness. from Mrs Torrie
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Kia ora Hayley,
ReplyDeletedid you walk through the tunnel? I didn't know that trains went up that far. I have been in a tunnel by Otoko so I knew that the railway went out there.
Has this poem got a special name for its type? The way you arranged the words is very effective. I especially liked "leaking, dripping, crying" It gave a sense of loneliness.
from Mrs Torrie
Kia Ora Mrs Torrie,
DeleteYes, we did walk through the tunnel. The type of poem is a 'Diamante Poem' Thanks for the feedback!
Ma Te Wa
Hayley :D