Friday, 26 June 2020

Matawai Railway Tunnel


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  1. Kia ora Hayley,
    did you walk through the tunnel? I didn't know that trains went up that far. I have been in a tunnel by Otoko so I knew that the railway went out there.
    Has this poem got a special name for its type? The way you arranged the words is very effective. I especially liked "leaking, dripping, crying" It gave a sense of loneliness.
    from Mrs Torrie

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    1. Kia Ora Mrs Torrie,
      Yes, we did walk through the tunnel. The type of poem is a 'Diamante Poem' Thanks for the feedback!
      Ma Te Wa
      Hayley :D

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