Today, I chose to complete a quick writing task from the Summer Learning Journey, all about writing poems! But not just any poems, Haiku's! A Haiku, incase your unsure, is a poem constructed of 3 lines, the first line has 5 syllables, followed by the middle line which includes 7 syllables and the last line once again made of 5 syllables. I have written a few Haiku's before at school, have you ever written a Haiku? However, the poem couldn't just be about anything, we had to write them around, Summer! Have you been enjoying your Summer?
When I think of Summer I think of LOTS of things, but I'm not going to list them because when if I started I wouldn't be able to stop, although, 1 of the main things I think of is the river or going to the beach. So, I decided to write mine about the beach. Here is my Summer Haiku, (well I wrote a few, not just one!) Here they are...
Kia ora Hailey. I am Kylah from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really like your Haiku poems.
I learnt that it had to be about summer.
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Mā te wā
Kylah.
Kia Ora Kylah,
DeleteThanks for the feedback! It's 'Hayley' by the way, but that's okay, I don't mind! Thanks again for your kind comment! I would love to check your blog!
Enjoy your holidays!
Be safe, and Happy New Year!
Mā te wā
Hayley
Kia Ora Fiona,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback! I can relate! I really like working out the correct number of syllables on each line too, it's fun!
I hope you have a good Summer holidays and a very Happy New Year!
Mā te wā
Hayley