Sunday, 27 December 2020

Summer Haiku

Today, I chose to complete a quick writing task from the Summer Learning Journey, all about writing poems! But not just any poems, Haiku's! A Haiku, incase your unsure, is a poem constructed of 3 lines, the first line has 5 syllables, followed by the middle line which includes 7 syllables and the last line once again made of 5 syllables. I have written a few Haiku's before at school, have you ever written a Haiku? However, the poem couldn't just be about anything, we had to write them around, Summer! Have you been enjoying your Summer? 

When I think of Summer I think of LOTS of things, but I'm not going to list them because when if I started I wouldn't be able to stop, although, 1 of the main things I think of is the river or going to the beach. So, I decided to write mine about the beach. Here is my Summer Haiku, (well I wrote a few, not just one!) Here they are...

(Sorry, in the image above I have made a small spelling error and I don't have the original to change it, 'shells' is supposed to be 'shell', thanks!)



I hope you like my Summer Haiku's! Enjoy the rest of your Summer holidays and be safe! What do you like to do the most in the holidays?




3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Hailey. I am Kylah from St Mary’s School.
    I really like your Haiku poems.
    I learnt that it had to be about summer.
    Please visit my blog
    here
    Mā te wā
    Kylah.

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    1. Kia Ora Kylah,
      Thanks for the feedback! It's 'Hayley' by the way, but that's okay, I don't mind! Thanks again for your kind comment! I would love to check your blog!

      Enjoy your holidays!
      Be safe, and Happy New Year!

      Mā te wā
      Hayley

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  2. Kia Ora Fiona,

    Thanks for the feedback! I can relate! I really like working out the correct number of syllables on each line too, it's fun!
    I hope you have a good Summer holidays and a very Happy New Year!

    Mā te wā
    Hayley

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