My first step on the moon would feel magical, incredible as I would know that I was the very first one, the absolute first one. I would feel strong and powerful! But, not only was the step a big moment, the ride in the space shuttle to get to and from space, would be a big moment, something could go wrong at any moment. Neil is an incredible person, and must of been very brave! He is a very admired person by American's and admired from other countries around the world. His 3 children must have looked up to him as well.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Hayley,
ReplyDeleteWow! Your blog post on Neil Armstrong contained a lot of great adjectives (descriptive words), using adjectives really helps the reader to imagine themselves in the scenario you are writing about - in this case, landing on the moon!
I agree that being the first person to step on the moon would be a very magical experience, it would be cool to see what you can find in outer space. Do you believe in aliens?
If you could go to any planet in the universe which planet would it be?
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Charlotte
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Kia Ora Charlotte,
DeleteThanks for the feedback, I really enjoy reading it!
I kinda believe in aliens because every once and a while on the news and TV people interview people who have seen sightings like circles in the lawns and bright lights etc. But, I don't because no one has proper proof.
I have know idea what planet I would visit, maybe I would visit Saturn to explore the rings around it. What planet would you visit???
Ma Te Wa,
Hayley :)
Kia Ora Hayley,
DeleteI am also not sure whether aliens are real or not, it would be pretty cool if they were! If aliens were real, what do you think they would look like?
If I were to visit any planet in the universe, I would choose either Mars or Saturn, this is because the colour of Mars (red) has always really interested me, as well as the rings around Saturn!
Space would be such a cool place to go and explore! If you got the opportunity to go to space, would you take it?
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Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey