Wednesday 11 December 2019

Simile Writing About Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce


Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce currently holds the record for the 100m sprint and has been crowned “world’s fastest woman” a record four times! I did some simile writing about her (under picture) She is currently 33 years of age and was educated in Jamaica.During her college years she did well in athletics, winning the Jamaican Schools Championships at the age of 16. She went on to win many races at both the Olympics and the World Championships. Over the years people have compared her running speed to elite sprinters, like Usain Bolt, to many things, including animals!Image result for she currently holds the record for the 100m sprint and has been crowned “world’s fastest woman” a record four times!,"
(image attribution: https://www.nbcmiami.com/news/national-international/natl-blade-runner-pistorius-makes-olympic-debut/2034566)
Here is my writing ... (below)

As fast as a shiny new gold super car with new rims and tyres,
As tall as a giraffe with an extra large neck that reaches the cloud
Is as small as a new born baby all wrapped up in a soft, warm cotton blanket,
Is as beautiful as a butterfly’s delicate colourful wide spread wings.



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