Nelson Mandela is an inspiration because he stood up and fought for what he believed in. He did a lot towards the fight for equality and is considered by many to be a hero.
Your journey entry written from the perspective of Nelson Mandela is great, you really capture the hardships that those political prisoners had to go through. They were not even allowed the little things that we all take for granted.
Have you ever stood up for something you believed in?
I really like the background you have used, it makes the journal entry look like it has been written on an old piece of dirty paper - which probably what Nelson Mandela would’ve had to write on.
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Kia Ora Hayley,
ReplyDeleteNelson Mandela is an inspiration because he stood up and fought for what he believed in. He did a lot towards the fight for equality and is considered by many to be a hero.
Your journey entry written from the perspective of Nelson Mandela is great, you really capture the hardships that those political prisoners had to go through. They were not even allowed the little things that we all take for granted.
Have you ever stood up for something you believed in?
I really like the background you have used, it makes the journal entry look like it has been written on an old piece of dirty paper - which probably what Nelson Mandela would’ve had to write on.
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Charlotte
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